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Friday, September 24, 2021

Narrative

 22 September 2021

WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing


On a rainy stormy day there were 3 campers called Lola. Her personality is kind and caring. On the day they were going camping she was wearing track pants and a nice big jacket. Her hair is blonde.  Pip the dragon was orange and pink he is a mud wing and his personality is sloppy, dirty but he is really nice. Max the bus driver was wearing a bus suit. His personality is kind but sometimes angry. On the way to the forest they were happily singing and laughing. When they got there they were walking along looking for somewhere to stay and then the storm started. It blew away their map but they kept walking through the strong winds.


Getting lost

After about 1 hour they found where they were going to camp. Well they were setting up the tent, Pip was looking for some food but there was none so he whispered to Lola “we've got no food.” Oh no lola said back.  After they set up camp they went for a little walk. On their way back they got lost and all their stuff blew far far deep in the forest, they huddled up and all they could hear was birds chirping and the wind gushing everywhere. They could only just see the yellow & green leaves. It was so dark. Lola was crying, Pip was groaning.  Max was living his best life.  (He was hanging from a tree like a monkey)


What a life saver Lola

All of a sudden Lola remembered that she had the bus keys and if she unlocked it, would make a noise and the lights would flash. So she told the others “look  guys there's the bus.” she kept doing that and they were getting closer and closer until BANG! They had all crashed into the bus quickly: they jumped in and drove home as fast as an elephant. When they got home they were absolutely drenched. Would you like to go camping tomorrow? 



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