The Lion King Movie Trip - First Draft

On Thursday Te manga and Te Tinana went to watch the lion king at Te Ahu.

first we got our bags ready after we got our  bags ready we got on the bus Evet made lion head bands for the girls they were so cute.

when we finally got there Whaea deb picked people that were sitting nicely to go get there pop corn and drink and then we went in we sat down and waited for the movie to start.

 first Rafiki the baboon  held Simbr the new baby lion all the other animals were gathered up on the grass. as he grew older he meet his uncle Scar well his dad went out hunting for food. 

Wonderful Sentences

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.

We Know That Wonderful Sentences Need:

• Detail (elaboration)
• Capital letters and full stops
• Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
• Quality vocab - WOW words

WALT recognise different parts of speech.

• Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi
• Adjectives describe nouns. Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
• Verbs are doing words. Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
• Adverbs describe verbs. Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping
• happily and chewing noisily.

Example:   

The bird is angry.
The bird looks angry and very evil.

The cat is sad.
The black fluffy cat is sad because he is lost in the freezing cold forest.