Narrative writing

20/09/21

WALT: Express myself in narrative writing

Title :The Big Day

Animal

On a sunny day up in a big high fat trunky tree in the middle of the school was an animal  named Jabari. Jabari was a big beautiful white, black and orange cheetah that had lived at the school for years.  Jabari had retired from hunting because of all the fights he had.  Everyday all the children from the school brang meat and cheetah food for him.

Rock concert

One day the school was having a big colorful rock concert in the fully decorated hall . Jabari got left out though. Then one of the nicest kids came out and whispered to Jabari “Come party with us!” so that is what he did. As Jabari walked in he was wowed! They danced all night and ate all night.

Incident

After the concert Jabari wanted to win some money. This week's lottery holds 1 million dollars. He had 2 dollars already. So he asked one of the kids to go to the shop and get a lottery ticket. When the kid got back with the ticket she handed it to Jabari and they both looked at each other and said “We won!!!” So the next day they went on a shopping spree and Jabari built a new house and lots of amazing things for it. Where they lived happily ever after