Bubble Art

In class we have been working on bubble art.   The N in the first bubble represents that I watched Netflix, the  bed in the 2nd bubble represents that I slept a lot and the last two mean I was riding my hover-board around and played with my dogs. Thank-you very much Whaea Donna  really appreciated it. 

Narrative writing

 Success Criteria:

I have proof-read my writing to ensure I have:

• Juicy sentence starters

• Correct punctuation - Capital letters, full stops, commas, speech marks, exclamation and question marks.

• A speech conversation in the body of my writing

• A simile in the body of my writing

• Read my writing to ensure it makes sense.

14 September 2021

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

Title: The 2 BFF’s  and the Bull

On a cloudless, sunny day, at approximately 3pm in the sizable paddock on the dairy farm situated in the Far North of New Zealand.  Lola & Izzy were trying to find something to do.  Lola was wearing a stripey  suit and blue farm overalls over them. She has long blonde flowing hair.  Izzy was wearing the exact same thing except she has short ginger hair. Lola’s personality is kind and caring, Izzy’s personality is also kind and caring but we can both be a little bit bossy sometimes. While they were in the paddock looking for something to do, Lola found a bunch of pretty flowers and started to teach Izzy how to make pretty chains.  Suddenly Izzy looked up and found lots of big, scary, mean  bulls in the very same paddock!

Problem

As Izzy & Lola were thinking of a plan Lola found the four seater red and black  motorbike  that they had used to get in the paddock. However the motorbike was beyond far away from where they were.  Luckily Izzy and Lola were very fast as they were running to the bike.  The bulls were getting angrier and angrier, “Phew finally we got there,” they groaned. Lola and Izzy hopped onto the motorbike and drove home safely. Telling  their Mum and Dad all about what had happened and how they escaped from the big, scary, mean bulls! 

Self Assessment:

      What I liked about my writing: 

• I wrote juicy sentences

• I did not use boring words

• I used capital letters

      What I need to do to improve my writing; 

• I need to be able to do all of my writing myself

• I need to stay on task

• Improve my proof-reading skills

Matariki

Te Puawai has been learning how to do a Matariki animation. Our teacher was Whaea Donna.  This is my slide please go check it out.  I liked slide 1 because we had to do all the matariki stars.  I struggled because we were drawing our hills and stars. Is their anything you think I could add to my slide. If there is, can you please comment? 

 

Lady-Bug

WALT: find an insect around Paparore school and do a slide about it.

 Here is mine please go cheek it out.

KA Maths Potaka

 This is my maths slide, please go cheek it out and comment if you have any suggestions on anything else I can add.

 

My Pet

 
My dog Koby is 9 years old. She is a German Shorthaired Pointer (GSP.) Her short coat is white with brown spots.  She is about as tall as my waist.  Her ears are about my hand size. 

Her favourite food is biscuits, avocados and bones. Koby likes to wreck the avocados, and likes to hide them under ground, plus she likes to hide her bones and scuff her dog biscuits as fast as she can, then when she eats them too fast she gets sick and lies down right on her food bowl.

Koby likes Tummy rubs,leaning on people,sleeping,quiet and food.  She doesn't like Loud noises,people touching her tail,people touching  her nose and ears. Koby does silly things like always eating avocados while jumping around like a Hippo, she is often sleeping on my Dad's chair which is Koby's fav chair. She can be as silly as a clown. 

Her nicknames are  Kob, Koby Woby,Kobs and sleepyhead. She sleeps as quietly as a Lion. My dog is always up on our deck where she is not allowed to be so my mum always tells her to get off. She always listens but when Mum is not looking she always sneaks back. She is a cheeky dog alright.

        

 

My Person

 The person inspires me is my Mum has long, brown, shiny, straight hair,  Her eyes are beautifully brown coloured,  with a hint of green.  Ears that  are nicely smooth and she wears perfectly amazing earrings.  She has a curved bumpy nose, and a nice bright smile that lights up my day when I see her smiling. Her skin is as smooth as a fluffy pencil case.

My favourite memory with my Mum is when me and Mum went to rainbows end because she was brave enough to take me on all the rides I wanted to go on and also the ones she wanted to go on. My Mum was as scared as a Lion on the fair-fall.

When my Mum gets angry she yells at anything she is close to even if it's not what made her mad.  Sometimes she storms to her room and shuts the door so Dallas my older brother has to look after me or my Dad will look after me.  My mum is as Amazing as a Yummy Smelling Flower.