DESCRIBE A MOMENT IN TIME - descriptive writing

WEEK 7 - WALT to hook our reader in with our first sentence.
WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.


What did I do well? The thing that I did well was use lots of descriptive words.

 What did I find tricky? The thing that I found tricky was adding writing that relates to my night sky writing.

 How can I extend myself next time? Add more descriptive writing. 

Celebrating Puanga at Ramanui

WALT find out what students at one school do to celebrate the Maori New Year. WALT to use the main ideas to summarise the text.

What did you enjoy? I really enjoyed learning about puanga, what the school did to celebrate the Maori new year. What surprised you? puanga is also called Rigel. What was the most interesting thing you learnt? The thing that I found interesting is that the Ramanui school celebrate Maori new year

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19Wb4OY7pUn1KY9i9G75-KKW3JPwXy74q/view


https://drive.google.com/file/u/0/d/19WvOAsdz52dSfdeJFoCgZ45jUqPIwk9D/view

What did I do well? The thing that I did well is read the book and  get information from the book.

 What was tricky?   The thing that I found tricky was making my scratch project.

 How can I extend myself next time? adding more information writing and details.

My cat Benjiman

The Plastic Free Challenge

WALT find out some of the causes, effects, and solutions for plastic pollution.

What did you find interesting? The thing that found interesting was how much plastic the kids found in one day! What 'plastic changes will you make at home and school? I think that I can use paper towels instead of glad rap for my sandwich at school. At home I think I can reuse cardboard instead of throwing it away.

What did I do well? putting the links and writing in.What was tricky? finding plastic pictures. How can I extend myself next time? adding more writing and punctuation.

Bubble Memories

We have been creating a google slide about our bubble memories.

We are learning to share our bubble memories with our class.Our class and me have made a google slide about our bubble memories. The first thing we did was plan. The second thing we did use our plan to write down some memories of the lock down.The last thing we did was make a google slide about it copped and pasted it in to the slides than add at least 1 picture to each slide. 

Take a look at my slide.
We are sharing memories from our lockdown bu


Something I did well was finding pictures that relate to my writing.

Something I found tricky was finding pictures that look really really similar to the real things

Something I could do better next time is add more detail and punctuation.